The most interesting part of a book or an extract is in fully understanding what it says, rather than how it says it. I realise that comprehension is a skill which we focus on almost exclusively up until the end of Key Stage 3, but often we stop at a surface understanding of the text. The analysis of the text which we ask students to undertake is not the analysis of meaning, it is the analysis of how the author created the meaning. We don’t ask, is this right? do we feel the same way? what follows from this if we believe it? what would another way of looking at this be? Is that how someone might really feel in that situation? Instead we ask, how did the author make us feel like that? What techniques did they use? How did those techniques affect they way we reacted to the text? Those seems to me to be the less interesting questions.
Don’t get me wrong, when you’re discussing a text you usually end up by talking about the techniques used at some point. When discussing why the text is able to make us change our minds without providing either evidence or a credible expertise, we will have to talk about techniques. When asking ourselves what benefits there might be in reading poetry, we may well come to the conclusion that the poet can use language to express our own thoughts in a way we could not, using language and structure techniques. It is the evidence we need to justify our reaction to the text, not the point of reading it.
The highest level of English most people will ever study is GCSE. At GCSE the focus is so heavily on the infinitesimal detail of how authors produce effects that many ordinary students barely note the meaning or point of the text before launching into why alliteration is used in the second paragraph. Is this the most important skill we want to pass on to our students?
I love language. I revel in different types of words and go away astounded and amazed by the beauty of the language authors use. I appreciate the effect the structure and form of a work has on its readers or audience, and I am certainly in favour of helping students understand how authors have manipulated both to create a specific effect in our minds. I don’t want to throw away that love and joy. I don’t want to detract from the marvellous talent authors use in creating their work. But Dickens did not write A Christmas Carol so that generations of children could remember the simile ‘solitary as an oyster’ and remember that he likes to use lists when describing people. He wrote that book in order to get us to realise that we need to be generous, to care about others, to behave as if we are part of one race of people and not individuals. He wanted to get rid of poverty and the rich person’s indifference to its effects. We still need that lesson today.
Every time we read a paragraph that starts ‘Dickens uses language and structure to engage the reader’ I think we need to think about what on earth we have done to the student to make them write such a load of vacuous nonsense. Which writer could ever write anything without using language and structure? Which writer ever wrote anything without wanting to engage the reader? If this is the starting point of our mid-range students, then we are doing something dreadfully wrong.
These works of literature exist outside in the real world. They are loved and appreciated. They change the way we see the world. They change our opinions and our actions. How can we teach them in such a way that they lose all of that power? We pin them down like butterflies on board, and they die in the process.
Instead of focusing on language and structure techniques, why don’t we compare different views, philosophical perspectives, bias and expertise? Why don’t we get the students to engage their brains and try and make them think about the big questions writers were trying to tackle? The answer, of course, is that our exam boards force us into a narrow route, and the accountability in our schools means we coach children into passing the exams instead of trying to raise their literacy level and inspire a love of reading and of learning which will last them their whole lives.
What is the answer? I have no solution. But the formulaic, meaningless essays I read from GCSE students, with no jot of authentic thought or personal response, are enough to make me start to hate the subject myself!



















